Wednesday, August 10, 2016

Lily's life Story 3#

Lily’s Life Story part 3
by Andrea Colmen

  Hello random citizens, I hope you liked part 2. It’s still ok if you didn’t. As I said part 2 is very sad and dark. But if you want the end of this emotional torture to come, now is your time. Well I will try not to conclude the story in sadness and darkness, but it might just saying. So relax in your favourite spot, keep calm and say part 3, here we come!

  It already had been 1 year of the emotional, stressful, and heart breaking torture. Lily had been in school for the whole year, not missing one day of it.  It was stressful. Literally one day while riding to school with her mom, she started to cry. Finally the worst effects started to settle in. Lily became sick with a rare and mostly unknown illness called stressfulness syndrome. She had to stay away from school for the illness was extremely contagious. “I have had enough of this torture, it’s stupid crap that should be avoidable at a very simple rate.” Lily said, shouting at the top of her lungs. The doctor came back with horrible news the next day. “ Mrs. and Mr. Jackson, I’m sorry to tell you this but your daughter is so stressed, she is dying, there is nothing we can do to cure this fatal disease.”. Lily was growing more and more weak by the second. At this rate she would be dead by the next day. “God, help me please, I don’t want to die, please help me!” Lily managed to speak one last time before taking the final breath.


  Trust me, the story will end happily. I just hope Lily will survive to see the next sunrise. See you in part 4. Bye.

2 comments:

  1. That's sad!! I can't wait to see the turn around! Well written! -Dad

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  2. Yeah, so sad..nothing seems to be going well for Lily. Hope she keeps trusting God.

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